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haze prado
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 6:05 pm

I've one manucsript na returned. Grabe, hinihintay ko pa naman un dahil wala na akong pera! It really got into my head for days. Then i used it as a motivation. Lahat ng emosyon ko dahil doon, ginamit ko sa next MS na isinulat ko. It worked. Mas madali kong natapos ang MS na yon. Ganoon talaga eh, walang kasiguraduhan. Ninenerbyos tuloy ako sa last na pinasa ko.haha.
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptySat Oct 16, 2010 4:26 pm

tama, hindi mahalaga kung ilang rejection ang dumating, ang mahalaga ay kung paano tayo tumatayo matapos mareject at kung anu-ano ung mga natutuhan natin Smile

continue writing guys Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptySat Oct 16, 2010 2:31 pm

Ako na-reject na twice pero sulat pa rin. Kelangang pagbutihin, aralin kung saan nagkamali, saka palawakin pa ang Tagalog vocabulary. Malungkot ma-return ang MS pero dapat ang perspective sa positive side. We have to learn. Write! Write!
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyThu Oct 14, 2010 12:48 pm

@ate ameera rain: sige na nga po ate ameera, ate na rin ako...hehehe, mag-ate-han na lang po tayO?? Hahaha! KalOka...haIzt!
gOodLuck sa mga MS natIn!!! =)
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyThu Oct 14, 2010 1:14 am

@freesia: tumpak na tumpak talaga ang share mo! let's take rejection as a challenge for us to do better next time... the saying TRY AND TRY UNTIL YOU SUCCEED really applies for us aspiring writers... yung latest kong isinusulat ngayon ako na mismo nag-reject...hehehe... malapit nang matapos ung chapter 10 ko nang maisipan kong baguhin uli ang plot...kaloka! well, sana magtagumpay me... God bless to all!
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyWed Oct 13, 2010 11:48 pm

Ate tenten---pag reject na wala na xa pag-asa hindi tulad ng for revision..ngayon f love mu talaga mga characters dun sa kwento pwd mu xang gawan ng bagong kwento...pwdeng may pagkakatulad p din peo iba na...tapos pwd mu na iaply dun ung mga comment ng editor...hehehe...un ang sabi sa akin ate...
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyWed Oct 13, 2010 11:45 pm

@ate freesia: Opo nga, hehe...i-imagine mo p lng mhirap n, hehe...panu p kea 'pag nsa hrapan mo n 'yung rejected mong manuscripts?? Mas mhirap, hehe. Kinbhan tuloy ako ulit, haha! First time ko lng xe mgpsa ng manuscripts, hIhI...
@ate ameera rain: Bkit po ate?? hIhIhI, bata p po ako, hahaha! Hmm...gnun po ba...mhirap nga po tlga. Xe 'yung ipinsa ko, niri-write ko lng. Pinhba pra maipsa s PHR. Hehe, pngatlo ata o pang apat ko n iyun n niri-write...hehe
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyWed Oct 13, 2010 11:19 pm

Ate Tenten---pag rejected pu hindi na ata xa pwde e revised...peo kung gusto mu p din xa e pursue magsisimula ka from the beginning...new plot at new story tapos aaply na ung mga sinabi ng editor...hehehe..un ang sinabi sa akin...
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyWed Oct 13, 2010 6:42 pm

tentenImae, sa tingin ko if you really want to revive a rejected MS, dapat mong sundin ang mga sasabihin ang editor na bumasa ng MS mo. Pero madugo 'yun, mahirap mag-revise kung buong MS ang aayusin mo.
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyWed Oct 13, 2010 7:55 am

ahh.. bounce maraming thank you po sa info:)

@tenten = goodluck'goodluck sa atin lahat:)
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 11:23 pm

@ate abby: ibig po bang sabihin..khit rejected si manu..pwede mo pa rin syang i-revise?? Bigyan ng bgOng mukha/bihisan...at baguhin 'yung mali, para 'pag ipinasa mo sya ulit..maaari ng magkaruon ng chance na ma-approved na sya?? Gulo 'ata ng tanong ko, hehe...
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 11:00 pm

@ate regy_snow: gOodluck din po sa MS mo
@ate freesia: hmm...since na natuto po ako sa paggamit ng comp.hindi na po ako nasanay magsulat sa papel. Haizt! Pero ngayon po..ndi na po ako ngtatype, xE sinira nung kapatid ko 'yung laptOp nmin eh, huhu..kea buti n lng din pO ntas n 'yung manu n niri-write ko bago ko po naipasa sa phr.
GOODLUCK sa mga MS natin!!
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 8:08 pm

Kapag rejected, kung trip mong -revise, gora lang. ahaha.
meron po kasing mga writer na hindi magawang "i-let go" ung isang MS.
Pero kasi, kapag sinabing revision, one to two chapters lang mostly
ang pinapabago. Ayan ay based sa experience. Hehehe!

Pag rejection/to be returned, mas maganda na na sundin ung
comments ng editor. Na baguhin ng buo. Harhar.

Pero rejected man o hindi, malaking accomplishment na ung
makatapos ka ng isang Manuscript. Kasi, lahat kayang magsulat.
Pero hindi lahat, nakakatapos ng manuscript Smile

Kaya, Ajaness~ Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 6:34 pm

regy_snow, sasabihin nilang revision ang result kapag ipapa-revise. sasabihin din nila sa iyo ung mga dapat mong i-revise. pero kapag returned, reject na talaga ýun ..

tentenImae, edi ngayon computer na ang tumatawag sa 'yo? hehe .. continue lang. go lang ng go , nawa'y pumasa ang MS nating lahat .. hehe, wala pa pala akong naipapasa .. di pa tapos ang latest kong isinusulat Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 1:15 pm

@ate regy_snow: hehe, opO, ngpasa dIn pO ako sa kanila ng manu. Ngayon..nag-aantay na lang po ako ng feedback galing s knIla.
@ate freesia: hmm..ako?? haha! KhIt noOng dI kO p nsusubukang magpasa ng manu, at pinpabasa kO lang s mga kaklase kO, naIsIpan kO n dIng itIgil, tOink! Sa kadahIlanan na..wla lang! Hehehe..peO wla p rIn eh. BabalIk at babalIk p rIn pO xe s ktOtOhnan na paSsIon mO 'yun. At hahanapIn p rIn ng kmay mO ang twag nI ballpen at papel. Haha! Sa papel po kasi ako nagsusulat noOn eh..ang gulO kO ba?? Haha,
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyTue Oct 12, 2010 12:43 pm

@tenten - oo, nagpass ako, one month pa daw ihihintay ko.
ikaw ba?

@freesia - ibig po bang sabihin noon, hindi na pwedeng i-revise 'yong story? talagang reject na, as in wala na?
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 11, 2010 11:08 pm

tentenImae, haha, oo naman, go lang ng go, if nagsusulat ka rin huwag kang susuko.. whatever may happen no one can take away your passion, nandyan ýan kahit anong mangyari kahit sandamakmak na reject man ang matamo mo.. Ang rejection ang isang daan para maging mas matatag ka and one way or another, it will help you to learn from your mistake para sa susunod hindi mo na ulitin ýun Smile

Regy_snow, kapag reject, 'to be returned' ang sasabihin nila hehe, believe me, i've gone thru that Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 11, 2010 10:21 pm

@Ate regy_snow: hIhI, ndi ko lng pO alam 'te. ntanOng ko lang po if magkapareho/mag-kaiba ang 'returned' at 'reject.' hehe..nag-pasa ka na din po ba ng manu??
@Ate freesia: thanks po sa pagsi-share. Oo, nga po if talagang passion mo ang pagsusulat..hindi mo dapat sukuan..gO lng ate! Hehe
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 11, 2010 9:28 pm

pasagot, ah ..

new here Smile

masakit talaga ang REJECTION .. based on my experience, hindi naman ako nahirapang i-handle .. nandyan naman kasi ang mga kapwa ko writers na sina Ate Janikka Bernardo, Princess Faye at marami pang iba .. Kapag may reject ako, sinasabi ko sa kanila and then sasabihin nila sa akin na ipagpatuloy ko pa rin ang pagsusulat Smile and the same goes also kapag isa man sa kanila ang depress. Friends who understands you most ang mga dapat mong nilalapitan kapag may 'to be returned' MS ka .. iyon lang though minsan parang isang malaking FAILURE na ang tingin mo sa sarili mo , hehe .. like me, i had two MS na ibinalik, consecutively .. but that was okay .. Life goes on and I don't have a choice but to move forward. And one more thing, kung passion mo talaga ang writing, you'll never give up kahit ilang REJECTS or 'to be returned' ang resulta ng MS mo Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 11, 2010 8:39 pm

talaga bang sasabahin na 'to be returned' ?? Question
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyMon Oct 11, 2010 6:15 pm

ahmm..ask ko lang po. Kapag sinabi po ba na 'To be returned..' ibig po bang sabihin nun ay reject 'yung manu mo po?? Salamat po sa sasagot..
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptySat Oct 09, 2010 11:06 pm

@robiespitz: kakatuwa naman, ka-batch pala kita... enjoy yung workshop 'no? goodluck sa 'tin mga aspiring writers...ung MS kong bago halos mlapit na matapos...
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptySat Oct 09, 2010 10:20 am

@eiram: sa pagkaka-alam ko, ang isang returned MS ay equivalent to rejected ms. hehe. ang for revision naman, maganda ang plot mo pero may mga ipapaayos lang ang editor at kapag naayos mo iyon ay may chance na ma-approve siya sa bandang huli.

Sana lang tama ang explanation ko. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 19 EmptyFri Oct 08, 2010 7:09 pm

hello! ano po kaibahan ng to be returned MS sa for revision na MS?
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wow wirite-may..magkabatch tayo hihihi....ui buti ka pa may naipasa na...hehehe...ako wla pa eh...im going to pass pa langn...dis oct..lyk my first ms..oct din siya naipasa...hahaha i really loved oct..hekhek..yep Godbless sa sinusulat mo:)
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