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Alejandro
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 10:55 pm
naks lian.suarez nakakapagod na magrevise ng MS. I prefer to write a new one than revising my MS... ang hirap kasi itrack yung mali o baguhin yung plot na una mong ginawa...
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 10:24 pm
ang alam ko, kung to be returned: option to revise, puwede mo pang baguhin at ipasa ulit.... pero, considered as bagong manuscript na iyan... kung walang sinabing option to revise, parang wala na atang pag-asa iyang ms mo... XD hindi lang ako sure...

pero don't worry, may mga comments naman ang reader kahit rejected ang ms mo... nang sa ganun, malaman mo kung ano ang mali ng ms mo at kung puwede mo pang maayos.... ^^,

about naman sa comments, depende iyan sa reader ng ms mo... kung revised, may inilalagay silang pointers para malaman mo kung major or minor revision ang gagawin mo... kung returned... comments lang para malaman mo kung ano ang dapat mong i-improve ang next ms na ipapasa mo..

gud luck! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 9:54 pm
Hello po! Medyo bago lang po ako dito nagppost. Matanong ko lang, kunwari po "to be returned" yung manuscript niyo, wala na bang chance maayos yun or wala na bang chance matanggap ulit kahit irevise mo? sa "to be revised" lang ba pwede?

pati, what kind of comments ang ibinibigay ng mga editors if your work was rejected or to be revised? curious po ako kasi I want to try writing, pero hindi ko alam saan magsisimula. medyo mahina pa naman ako sa written Filipino.

thanks in advance for any answers! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 5:00 pm
Vian: puwede yang ma-approve! ^^,

galingan mo lang ang pag-revise! hehehe.. careerin mo na! chance mo na iyan! go go go!

kung major revision naman, sundin mo lang ang pointers nila.. kaya mo na iyan!

book imprint: ibig sabihin, katulad iyan sa mga Hot Intruder, Gothic, PHR presents.. churva.. ganun..
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 3:54 pm
Thanks po, Ms. Gabriev, pero ano po ba ang ibig sabihin ng book imprint? Ha-ha! sa sister publication? Di ko alamers.
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 3:44 pm
Kung min0r lang naman revisi0n, Irevise m0. Kc sayang naman. Sabi naman ata ng editor may p0tential pa syang maayos. Gambare! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 3:25 pm
Miss Gabriev, OO, yun po Smile)

Ilovepixiedust! Thank you, kahit parang wala naman hehe! Smile)
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyWed Oct 19, 2011 1:00 am
Yung xa D.L ba yan Vian?
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 10:54 pm
VianTheGreatwatever wrote:
Waaa, matagal-tagal din hindi nakapagpost. Tanong lang at alam kong out of topic. Just received my feedback sa 2nd MS ko. Haha! Unexpected kala ko returned or reject, aba for revision ang lola. Haha! Ito po ang tanong, ano po ba ang ibig sabihin ng book imprint na bago ng PHR na *spoiler alert*? Tapos kailangan ko talagang sundin lahat ng mga gustong ipabago ng editor? May chance ba na mag reject o ma-approve na itey? Kasi sabi ng editor, pag tapos ng marevise, e-attach ko na rin daw ang teaser, cathline at ang suggested pen names at mga ka-ek-ekan pero parang hindi ko pa feel dahil baka mareject siya. Waaa, confused at the same time masaya dahil hindi ko ine-expect. Pa-sagot naman oh? Smile)
wow! CONGRATS po! bounce
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 8:48 pm
Waaa, matagal-tagal din hindi nakapagpost. Tanong lang at alam kong out of topic. Just received my feedback sa 2nd MS ko. Haha! Unexpected kala ko returned or reject, aba for revision ang lola. Haha! Ito po ang tanong, ano po ba ang ibig sabihin ng book imprint na bago ng PHR na *spoiler alert*? Tapos kailangan ko talagang sundin lahat ng mga gustong ipabago ng editor? May chance ba na mag reject o ma-approve na itey? Kasi sabi ng editor, pag tapos ng marevise, e-attach ko na rin daw ang teaser, cathline at ang suggested pen names at mga ka-ek-ekan pero parang hindi ko pa feel dahil baka mareject siya. Waaa, confused at the same time masaya dahil hindi ko ine-expect. Pa-sagot naman oh? Smile)
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hellionist wrote:
@lian
Add kita sa FB ha. May mutual friends naman tayo. Nasa last workshop ka ba? And more power sa susunod na mga books. cheers


thanks ate.. ahihihi... kaya mo iyan... just go go go! hindi pa ako nakaka-attend sa kahit anong workshop pero sana, maligaw man lang ako sa kahit isa man lang, para experience at para ma-meet ko rin ang iba pang aspiring writers... ^^,
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 12:51 pm
english siya.. for Harlequin NASCAR Series.... kaya mahaba siya... 3 months ko na itong ginawa... ini-edit ko pa lang yung mga spelling and grammars ko pati na rin ang formar
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyTue Oct 18, 2011 11:46 am
Ako, I took it as a challenge ng malaman kong for returned ang MS na isinulat ko. Dapat kaunting emote lang tapos back in court na agad use the rejection as inspiration na "gagalingan ko pa"
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptySun Oct 09, 2011 2:15 pm
@lian
Add kita sa FB ha. May mutual friends naman tayo. Nasa last workshop ka ba? And more power sa susunod na mga books. cheers

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hellionist wrote:
kwesifriends wrote:

Kakasimula ko lang ring magbasa ng PHR novels pero madami na akong nabasang blurbs na may ganyan. have you tried Arielle's works? Parang ganyan kasi ang mga trology niya.

Sadly, CMT pa lang nabasa ko sa mga works ni Arielle. Hindi ko pa nababasa yung last book. Sad

@lian Plano ko kasing gumawa ng ala-Kate & Leopold. Hehehe.

Ako wala pa, as in 0. Pero meron na ako nung latest niya at so far yung trilogy na ang next kung babasahin. Sabay tayong magbasa nun kung gusto mo.
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 10:54 pm
ate... mas matanda ka naman talaga sa 'kin... XD 19 lang ako... hahaha... ito na talaga ang pen name ko... ako si rovie625 eh... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 10:22 pm
@lian
Maka-ate ka naman. Hahaha. Okay na ang hell. Sad Oo nga eh. Salamat sa encouragement. Wink Oo nga pala, ano ang pen name mo?
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptySat Oct 08, 2011 10:19 pm
ate hellionist: kaya mo iyan.. ako nga ay werewolves ang theme ko... hahaha... sana lang maisulat ko ng maayos kasi wala pa naman akong experience sa pagsusulat ng action... basta sulat ka na lang... malay mo, pumasa...
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kwesifriends wrote:

Kakasimula ko lang ring magbasa ng PHR novels pero madami na akong nabasang blurbs na may ganyan. have you tried Arielle's works? Parang ganyan kasi ang mga trology niya.

Sadly, CMT pa lang nabasa ko sa mga works ni Arielle. Hindi ko pa nababasa yung last book. Sad

@lian Plano ko kasing gumawa ng ala-Kate & Leopold. Hehehe.
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lian.suarez wrote:
kwesi: kaya mo iyan... gud luck! oh, by the way... kailangan pala na may action sa gothic.. iyon ang sagot nila nang magtanong ako about sa kanila about gothic stories... ^_^

Naku! Sana nga makaya ko yan and thanks, meron na akong plano at nainspire yun sa isang book na nabasa ko at sana magkatotoo. Weeee! Pero hindi muna ngayun.
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May fantasy-based na ba na PHR novel? Hindi naman yung sobra, kumbaga parang mga sumpa sumpa, mala-Machete type, etc...

Kakasimula ko lang ring magbasa ng PHR novels pero madami na akong nabasang blurbs na may ganyan. have you tried Arielle's works? Parang ganyan kasi ang mga trology niya.
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PostSubject: Re: "TO BE RETURNED"   "TO BE RETURNED" - Page 6 EmptyFri Oct 07, 2011 11:36 pm
hellionist: fantasy based na phr novel? wala akong alam... kung meron sana, magpapasa ako... XD

kung about sa sumpa-sumpa, i think it will fall under the gothic category... dagdagan mo lang ng dark theme and voila!

mala-machete type.. ewan ko lang kung may epic stories sila... wala pa yata...

kwesi: kaya mo iyan... gud luck! oh, by the way... kailangan pala na may action sa gothic.. iyon ang sagot nila nang magtanong ako about sa kanila about gothic stories... ^_^
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May fantasy-based na ba na PHR novel? Hindi naman yung sobra, kumbaga parang mga sumpa sumpa, mala-Machete type, etc...
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lian.suarez wrote:
gothic?

48,000-62,000 words, kwesi....

katumbas ng special edition na 256 pages at 364 pages(?) na pocketbook... Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Wow! Ang dami naman niyan parang pagtyagaan mong tapusin sa isang taon. Try ko nga yan next time kung marunong na akong gumawa ng short novels.
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gothic?

48,000-62,000 words, kwesi....

katumbas ng special edition na 256 pages at 364 pages(?) na pocketbook... Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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